Well, I've found some areas in which my previous entries have been sorely lacking. As we speak, I'm rewriting parts of Chapters 2-13 in order to add more suspense, action, and a bit more sense and cohesion to the work as a whole. It has been brought to my attention that there are several places where more explanation and background is needed and plenty of places where I've noticed the villains and storyline in general could be tweaked to better get the story across.
The things I've added thus far will give us more insight into Charlie and why he's such a nice guy, more of Dan's background, more of the history of the Sirens and why they are in the predicament they are in, and a bit more about the girls in general. I'm also working to build the villains up a little more and build more suspense within their sub plots before I start bringing it all together. I'm also working like a fiend on Chapter 14 but that chapter's finish is going to hinge on me getting all my edits done as well. In a nut shell, it means when I finally post Ch. 14, I'll be posting all new material for some of the previous chapters as well so those of you who've read this before might want to skim through the edits when I get them posted before moving on to Ch.14. If there are any major requests, comments, questions, or concerns, please feel free to let me know and I will keep you all posted on future chapters and the possibility of moving to a website.
